I guess you finished with this essay, but for the next time do this
the first paragraph must contains: hook, connecting sentences, and the thesis statment or( the topic sentence) ... and the last paragraph ( the conclusion is supposed to have : rewrite the topic sentence, connecting sentences, and rewrite the hook)...of course rewriting means in another way
* hook means something you attract the reader to read ur essay
** I wonder why saudian students always write about (Kabsah)
good luck
7 " the first paragraph must contains: hook, connecting sentences, and the thesis statment or( the topic sentence) ... and the last paragraph ( the conclusion is supposed to have : rewrite the topic sentence, connecting sentences, and rewrite the hook)...of course rewriting means in another way
* hook means something you attract the reader to read ur essay
** I wonder why saudian students always write about (Kabsah)
good luck
October 11th, 2011, 03:53 PM
in this essay i need more sentence in the in the conclusion i just run out of word could u guyz help me