Pump Up Your English - أرفع مستوى لغتك بالكتابه بمشاركتك مع الاعضاء.

hello my friend
the S refers to USING CELLPHONS, which is the SUBJECT ..
Using cellphones, is considered as a combined noun one in two words
which means, you cannot say "Cellphones in class" or "Using in classes" .. both way will make the sentence meaning incomplete.
so combining those two words will complete the meaning of the sentence, and we will deal with them as a ONE combined noun.
That means the noun here will be plural ...

Also, I want to mention ..
I made a mistake with the sentence ...

the correct sentence should be :
First of all, using cellphones in classes will prevent students from paying attention to their teachers

that is because the sentence should be in the future not in the simple present.
that's the correct sequence for the sentence timeline.

Thank you Aseer for pointing that, I just realized it when I read the sentence again.

You're quite welcome

I'm still waiting for the paragraph you told us about

السلام عليكم ورحمة الله وبركاته ..

اخواني انا اعتذر عن هذا الخطأ ومافيه احد معصوم من الخطأ ..
سبق وقلت لكم اني لا اخلو من الاخطاء ولكن احاول دائما ان اتفادا هذه الاخطاء ..
وانا ابحث عن من يصحح لي اخطائي حتى لا اقع فيها مرة اخرى .. حتى وان كنت متمكن من الكتابه .. فهذا لايعني اني لا اخطأ .!

عموما .. انا ساكتب كلامي بالعربي حتى تكون الامور اوضح ..

وأرجوا لكل من قرأ ردي رقم 123 ومابعده من ردود مابيني وبين اخوي اسير .. أن يركز بهذا الرد ..

في الرد 123
http://www.mbt3th.us/vb/forum8/threa...post1062245634


قمت بتصحيح قطعة الاخت "معيدة ومبتعثه"..


فأخطت بتصحيح جملة .. الا وهي :
First of all, using cellphones in classes prevents


وهو اني اعتقد ان كلمة using cellphones جمع .. وهي تعتبر مفرد لان هذه قاعدة تسمى " Gerunds as Subject " ..


وبإختصار القاعدة توضح حول كيفية اعادة صياغة الجملة ..
فمثلا بإمكاننا القول :
Riding horses is fun
أو
It is fun to ride horses
فبكل الأحوال الجمله معناها واحد .. وتأخذ على انها مفرده وليست جمع بالحالتين ...!


هذي القاعدة الاساسية لهذا الخصوص :



وهذا رابط فيه شرح مختصر او مراجعه عامه للقاعده هذي :
Review of Gerunds








والشكر لله اولا .. ثم لاخونا اســـ الهم ـــير لأنه صحح لي المعلومه ..


وانا اعيد ماقلته سابقا .. انا اخطأ كثيرا .. فمن وجد خطأ فلا يتردد ابدا بإعلامي او بتصحيح الخطأ .. او حتى على الاقل لو اعطاني رابط او مصدر معين يوضح القاعد الصحيحه .. فانا لا امانع بل ساكون سعيد جدا لذلك ..


هذا الموضوع وضع لتطوير مهاراتنا عن طريق اخطائنا ... وهذا ايضا يشمل معد الموضوع ومنشأه ..!


فليس هنالك احد معصوم من الخطأ .. ولكن الكل يحاول جاهدا أن يقدم افضل ما لديه ...




رسالة خاصه اســـ الهم ـــير..
اشكرك جزيل الشكر والله يجعله في ميزان حسناتك ..
وافرح كثيرا لو وجدت معنا وصححت لي اخطائي ..

حبيب قلبي والله،، اشكرك ع الموضوع المميز

واكيد راح اتواجد معكم عشان استفيد وافيد

يعطيك العافيه ع جهودك عزيزي

بالتوفيق للجميع

الله يجزاك خير على كل حال يكفي واناا اخوك انك تساعد ومجتهد.. الله يبيض وجهك وماحد معصوم من الخطاء الله يوفقك من وين مارحة والله يوفقك الجميع

وشكرك اسير على المشاركة واحلى تحيك لك Mr 10K

I am back ...

I brought a short paragraph with me

What you need to do is to find the mistakes and correct them ...

the paragraph has about 35 mistakes ..

Try to find them and correct them ...

Here is the paragraph ...

world hottest desert in the world is also one of the largest, cover an area that stretch across the north of africa from red sea in the east to the atlantic in the west. in total, it will span 9,400,000 sq km (3,500,000 sq mi) - nearly as big as china or the united states.


in the searing heat of the day its hard to imagine a more desolate place. but hid with the vast dunes and swath of dust are mineral left from an earlier, more fertile time when the region is home to agriculture, along with plant animal now more common found in the savannahs further south.


today, these minerals continue to support life. but to do that they are must first going on an extraordinary journey.


blown into the high atmosphere, this dust is carried across the atlantic where it fall with the rain across the amazon rainforest, injected much needing nutrient into this bio-diverse ecosystems.




Answers will be due Saturday, 16th February 2013, 11:59 PM.
Time zone: (UTC-06:00) (Centeral Time - US & Canada).


Any answer after the due date will not be count as an answer

The largest hottest desert in the world covers an area that stretches across the north of Africa from theRed Sea in the east to the Atlantic Ocean in the west. In total, it spans 9,400,000 sq km (3,500,000 sq mi) - nearly as big as China or the United States.
In the searing heat of the day it's hard to imagine a more desolate place. But hid with the vast dunes and swath of dust are minerals left from an earlier more fertile time

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That was difficult. I've done the first part, and I was totally exhausted

Anyhow, I know that it's late, but check it for me ^_^

You asked for it ..

You did pretty good.
You got 12/17

There is no need to add new words.
Just all you need is to :
- Change the timeline sequence. (present, past, future)
- Capital some words.
- Adding "THE" to some words.
- Singular or Plural


ALSO:
There are TWO wrong words have been added.

understanding the passage is very powerful way to find the mistakes.
so try to read it at least twice.
Follow the passage scenario and you will be fine.

Alslam 3lekm ,

actually always 10K making wonderful subjects, this one of them,go ahead on it

Good luck guys

I've never been good at reading, yet I'm working on it

Next time I'm gonna do better

^_^