المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة معيده ومبتعثه
I swear you are the prince and the best one in this forum
.
This is the best idea and the
adviser in this forum must
keep this subject forever because it
really will benefit all
students
also,I can not wait to see the
writing from the great member
s here
and I am sure that I will write here every day god willing.
thank you so much.
First I am not a prince, I am just a guy who wants to learn some skills with new vocabulary.
Let us begin with your post.
Corrections:
"I swear you are the prince and the best one in this forum.
This is the best idea and the forum moderator in this forum must stick this thread forever because it will really benefit all students
also,I can not wait to see the posts from our great members here,
and I am sure that I will write here every day god willing."
- "
adviser" .. the person who monitors the forum named "
Forum Moderator"... The "adviser" is the person who gives advice depending on his knowledge and experience.
- " keep this subject forever" .. you can say "
Stick" or "
Sticky" it is a common word means "
Pined".
- "
it really will benefit all students"... " nothing wrong " :> just a suggestion might be helpful. (It will be better if you say " it will really" always better to have the subject followed by the helping verb, it will be easier to read. )
-"
Writing from the great members". just say "
the posts from our great members " (replace writing with posts)
Optional: " I can not wait to see the great posts from our members."
المشاركة الأصلية كتبت بواسطة معيده ومبتعثه
also I know that I will write a lot of mistakes
but I will be so happy if any one here correct them and I will ask God everyday
for helping him/her.
Always. God names, prophets names, Quran, Hadith.. and so on, begin with
Capital letter.
you are doing fine, just keep going sister.
محمد فهد .. January 24th, 2013, 10:43 AM
7 "
Let us begin with your post.
Corrections:
"I swear you are the prince and the best one in this forum.
This is the best idea and the forum moderator in this forum must stick this thread forever because it will really benefit all students
also,I can not wait to see the posts from our great members here,
and I am sure that I will write here every day god willing."
- "adviser" .. the person who monitors the forum named "Forum Moderator"... The "adviser" is the person who gives advice depending on his knowledge and experience.
- " keep this subject forever" .. you can say " Stick" or "Sticky" it is a common word means "Pined".
- " it really will benefit all students"... " nothing wrong " :> just a suggestion might be helpful. (It will be better if you say " it will really" always better to have the subject followed by the helping verb, it will be easier to read. )
-"Writing from the great members". just say " the posts from our great members " (replace writing with posts)
Optional: " I can not wait to see the great posts from our members."
you are doing fine, just keep going sister.