Pump Up Your English - أرفع مستوى لغتك بالكتابه بمشاركتك مع الاعضاء.

my class had 33 American students....etc

If you say " I had 33 American students" then it means that you are having them under your control. (Like: Instructor, DR, Manager, Supervisor, .. etc).
but since that you are still students and talking about your classmates, you should say " my class had " ...


I think I got it right


Take care my friend,

Hey everyone,
I don't have much tonight ,but I want to share this idiom with you all.

" has a knack for something "
=
example:
1ok has a knack for cooking
1ok has knack for math

i hope you all understand it,, please let me know if you don't

Excellent post,

Thank you for this information, and yes Knack is a good word to share,
it means that you are a really good specialist in something that you are talented in.


Thank you for sharing sis,

looking forward to see again with us.

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Excellent post,

Thank you for this information, and yes Knack is a good word to share,
it means that you are a really good specialist in something that you are talented in.


Thank you for sharing sis,

looking forward to see again with us.

Hummm,

I'm thinking about doing something new.

What about if I post a paragraph and you have to point out the mistakes with the correct sentence.?

Does it sounds good ?
if you like this idea and you need me to post that paragraph give me LIKE .

ummm
i like this , very good

this is my first paragraph

the subject about >write a paragraph if you are agree or not agree for using cellphone in the class .


الموضوع بعد النصايح والتعديل .

In my opinion,teachers should prevent their students from using cellphones in class for many reasons
First of all,using cellphones in classes prevents students from paying attention with their teachers .In addition, the students who use cellphones in class may not be interested with their activities.Another significant thing is that the teachers will explain the lessons for the students without any benefits. On the other hand,if the students use the cellphone in class for using dictionary , I think they can use it after they take permission from their teachers.

In conclusion , some people may believe that using cellphones in classes should be allowed but I believe that their drawbacks outweigh their advantage,



الله يستر شكلي جبت العيد




ماعرفت اعدل اكثر من كذا مالقيت كلام اعبر فيه اصلا لأن الموضوع محصور كله نفس الكلام مايستخدموا التليفونات عشان كيت وكيت وخلاص .. ايش باقي اعدل واضيف

ثاني شي ايش تقصد اخوي انه لازم اخلي كتابتي وتفكيري سلس وسهل مو فاهمه النقطة هذي .... فهمني فيها الله يجزاك خير يعني انا اكتب بطريقة معقدة واخلي الموضوع صعب


انتظر الله والله يعطيك ألف عافيه ... وبجد تعلمت كثييــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــــ تر من نصايحك الله يوفقك ..

i like this post!!!!
it remembered me of a nice idiom that said
not until the fat lady sing
which means
it is not over yet!!!
my teacher used to use this idiom a lot

i am more interested in learning the slang and the idioms more than learning the accent







i love this idea
go ahead brother

بحاول اصحح اللي اقدر عليه ، واذا جا 1OK راح يفيدك اكثر

التصحيح راح يكون بالخط الازرق


The reason why I removed the article " the " from most of your sentences is because you're are not talking about a single classroom or a single student, but you're making a generalization

Just make sure to CAPITALIZE the first letter of each and every sentence.

Other than that, I believe that it was well organized

Keep up the good work

Welcome back sister,
What a wonderful start ...

This is really a good paragraph, it has some mistakes but still has its own goodness.

The first thing that I want to ask you about this
Is this your subject title ?
if yes, then it is a long title..
If you want a really good title for your subject, you should always try to short up your terms.
For instance, you're talking about using cellphones in class, so I can say in the title : Using Cellphones inside Classroom
That will make it more understandable and straight to the point.

the subject is about >writing a paragraph if you agree or disagree with using cellphone in class

Agree & Disagree :
Most of the positive words you can convert them to negative by adding DIS before the word.
Examples :
Positive words : Agree, advantage , able, patch ...etc
Negative: Disagree, Disadvantage, Disable, Dispatch ..etc


The letters in RED color, should be deleted.
The letters in Blue are WRONG, and should be corrected
The letters in Orange are BETTER if you rephrase them.


TO never comes after SHOULD

OF according to your sentence, the correct word will be FROM

IN THE CLASSnever say that, always say IN CLASS

SUCH AS , ENGLISH CLASS FOR ARABIC STUDENTyou don't have to provide examples on something that we already knew



Regarding the words in Orange.
They are correct grammatically, but you wrote them in a very complicated way .
I want you to rethink and rephrase the sentences in ORANGE again.
try a different way to express your thoughts within your words.
and remember ... always THINK SIMPLE ...

this time I will try another method to make you improve your writing by yourself.


Let me know if you have any question.

glad to see you my brother,
nice work !

In the main time, we're not focusing on the structure more than the writing itself.
what we need is to let people write as much as they can, which will make it easier for them to develop their writing skills.
specially in HOW TO choose the right words to make a perfect sentence.
because the main problem with most of people is HOW TO THINK IN WRITING.
if you told them to write a paragraph with just five sentence, they will find it very difficult to write a simple paragraph.
so we are trying to expand their thoughts and skills to make them more flexible to use when needed.


Other corrections and additions are welcomed, because we have different skills levels.
That will be very helpful though.
and I am trying to not make it restricted with a lot of rules.

because we are not in academical place to be perfect ... but we use FUN as a free way to learn

That is the main idea of this thread.


keep it up man,
you are always welcome and I will be more than happy to see you here.