Pump Up Your English - أرفع مستوى لغتك بالكتابه بمشاركتك مع الاعضاء.

Ok It is a good Idia I like it that why Iam starting writng the sentens , moreover next week proply Iam going to take ialits test just mak doa for me

Good job my brother
However there are some mistakes
1-start to write this sentence or start writing the sentence
2- probably
3- IELTS
4- doa= pray


Maybe I'm wrong, but I want to try
thanks



really it's a good idea



I HOPE I can meet some people are not with me in my coming days, BUT they put marked in my life, does not matter if it was good or bad marked I will remember them

Great heading (not surprising it came from you). I really like this idea that you offered. I think it is important understanding meaning behind change that helps to motivate others for improving their second language. Members of our forum have to understand that this idea is not going to be easy at first, and it will often be a struggle. However, it is one of the best way to develop our writing skills efficiently. Finally, one of my favorite sayings is "change comes from within." Thanks

Correction:
Okay, it is a good idea. I like it. That is why I am writing this sentence, because I am going to take IELTS next week. Pray for me.

If you want to say (OK) you have to options to write it formally.
1. O.K
2. Okay
also, you have some spelling mistakes. which you can figure from the correction.

The next part of the sentence is the part you should focus on.
"you said " moreover next week proply Iam going to take ialits test
On the second part of the sentence, you want to emphasis the reason of the first sentence which is " It is a good idea". So, you have to support your opinion with a reason on why you think it is a good idea. In this case it is better to begin with " because" rather than " Moreover".

Also,
Make doa' for me.
It is the same as Pray for me
If you said " I am praying to Allah" then it means that you are doing Salah.
and if you say " I am praying for you" then you mean Doa'a


I hope I got everything right.



I told you, you should write a formal sentence ..

I swear you are the prince and the best one in this forum.


This is the best idea and the adviser in this forum must keep this subject forever because it really will benefit all
students

also,I can not wait to see the writing from the great member here

and I am sure that I will write here every day god willing.

thank you so much.

also I know that I will write a lot of mistakes but I will be so happy if any one here correct them and I will ask god everyday for helping him/her.

You do not have to say " Start to write" if you already "Writing" the sentence.
That will repeat the verbs in the same sentence. So, if you are doing something you can always say what are you doing without adding additional verbs >
example : Start to write or Start writing.
Correction : Writing this sentence.

Grammer Rule : Present continuous
Subject + Helping verb + verb1 + ING ...
How simple is that

Read more above ...



Part one : I HOPE I can meet some people are not with me in my coming days
How are you going to meet them if they are not with you in the future ?
I think I misunderstood the meaning or you meant something else.


Part 2 : BUT they put marked in my life, does not matter if it was good or bad marked I will remember them
Put: it is already in the past ...
(Put, Put, Put)
(present, past, past participle)

so in this case you better say " put marks" so "marks" will be the "Object".
also, the second word " Marked" same mistake, and even if you said " marks" it will better if you dump it, because the " good or bad" referenced to their subject " it ".

another thing, use " left " rather than " put" ..
left past of leave ...
Correction : but they left marks in my life, does not matter if they are good or bad. I will remember them.

Okay guas In fact I was not fuce in mu sentus when I writ it, so that why I had alot of maistak I know I have speling mistak put I hope In futher I can writ with out any maistaks think you all I whis for you all the best

Correction:
Great topic (I'm not surprised it came from you). I really like your idea that you offered. I think it is important to understand the meaning behind the corrections to improve others English.
Our forum members have to understand that this idea is not going to be easy at the beginning, and it will be struggled more often. However, it is one of the best ways to develop our writing skills efficiently. Finally, one of my favorite quotes is "change comes from within".

- A "heading" it could be a topic, but it has other several meanings. like ( title of something, subtitle, a top of something and so on).
While you meant in the sentence (Topic) which is the post that I did. So, it is better to use "topic" to specify the meaning that you want.

- I'm not surprised: If you want to express your feelings, you always tailed the word with "ed" and make sure to add the "Subject + helping verb" before it.
example : I am not surprised, I am interested .. and so on.

- If you want to point something important to do or feel or think, you have to say "important" followed by "to" .. "Important to ... "
- "understanding meaning" it is impossible to have two verbs in one sentence with the same time line. (present, present) ( past, past) .. and so on.

- "Change" ... you meant "corrections", so you have to write corrections, otherwise we will not know what changes you are talking about !. (same one... specify the meaning that you want).
- "Change that helps to motivate others for improving their second language." .. It is a long way to say that, also that way will cause some mistakes as you already have. (Short your words to the point).

-"Members of our forum" it is better if we flip it a around so it clears itself.

- "it will often be a struggle".... use the present perfect form.

- "one of the best ways"... The rule of "One of MANY".. always begin with singular and end with plural.

- "sayings" ... you mean " quotes " .....
Well say my friend, nice one.. I have added to my favorites too.